How to See the Invisible Half of CONTENT:  making the visible even more visible

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How to See the Invisible Half of CONTENT: making the visible even more visible

What came first, the thought or the need to think it? 

While you wonder about this question, let me continue…I’ll soon tell my answer and why I think this riddle should matter to writers and writing teachers.

In the “Faculty Robing Room” yesterday at my college’s 150th-anniversary winter graduation ceremonies, I chatted with some colleagues—smart, excellent writers/writing teachers—about whether students in a freshman writing class produce in their writing assignments imaginative, energetic content.

“No, not so much”…their answer didn’t surprise me. What did make me gasp a little was how they conceived of CONTENT....

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Fun with Sentences = Better Writing

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Fun with Sentences = Better Writing

If you like puzzles, you should like playing with sentences…as it turns out, “writing” is a lot like playing with LEGOs. All it takes is determination to have fun and knowledge of a few phrases that allow us to see words and clusters of words as our puzzle pieces, which can be snapped together to create just about anything we can imagine. Having fun putting sentences together will make your writing a little better....

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Why Students Can’t REVISE

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Why Students Can’t REVISE

Sitting in a recent meeting of college writing teachers, who were grumbling because they couldn’t get their students to earnestly revise their writing assignments, I realized why re-vision is often nearly impossible for students and how to solve the problem....

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Ask Me Any Question About Writing....

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Ask Me Any Question About Writing....

Welcome to a new feature on this blog. Every few months, I'll post this offer to answer writing questions you might have. Just post a question in the "comments" section, and I'll answer. It may even be "the right answer," thought-provoking, or...useful.

The writing doctor awaits your QUERIES....

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Why “Essays” Are a Bad Way to Teach Writing…and What Is a Good Way?

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Why “Essays” Are a Bad Way to Teach Writing…and What Is a Good Way?

Writing classes aren’t working so well. I invite you to watch a short video from CNBC, narrated by Kelley Holland, “Why new employees can’t write and why employers are mad.” (http://video.cnbc.com/gallery/?video=3000217064)

She points out that we’re doing more writing in the workplace than we did 30-40 years ago, so writing skills have become even more important. But employers see that new employees lack strong writing skills. She points out that even graduates from the nation’s top business schools often lack necessary writing skills.

I’ve seen this to be true in my 30 years of writing consulting for the public and private sectors, working with the best and brightest graduates from programs in public policy, engineering, and business, etc.

Ms. Holland suggests one cause for this problem: we focus more on math and science in schools to the exclusion of writing classes. This may be true. But I believe we teach writing ineffectively. We teach students to write essays. Writing essays does not develop the kind of critical-thinking and writing concepts and techniques students will need on the job.

THE PROBLEM?

In high school and college, when students are in a writing class, most likely they’re writing essays. Most likely they’re taught how to write primarily by writing essays. Perhaps essays have their place in the curriculum. But essays should be excluded from most writing classes and saved for advanced classes that seek to teach students expressive writing and eloquence.

The essay is a bad way to teach writing for most beginning and intermediate writing classes…from first grade through college. Here’s why…..

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KISSING 101: Keeping it simple is not always so simple

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KISSING 101: Keeping it simple is not always so simple

As a writer you face two big questions:

· What should I say?

· How should I say it?

And workplace writers are further admonished to keep it simple (stupid): K.I.S.S. But how?

If you have a simple message—Be at the meeting at 2PM, Suite A—KISS is pretty easy. But as the message becomes more complex, the more complex it becomes to keep the message simple.

If you’re stuck, intimidated, frustrated, or confused by trying to figure out what you should say and how you should say it, all while keeping it simple, this blog post is for YOU! You should love to write about as much as you love to talk, right?

(1) You need to gain a little insight into how readers read.

(2) You need to understand how writing communicates.

Knowing these two things will help you take on any writing task with confidence, while being a good K.I.S.S.er…..

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CUIng…the NEW BASICS for writing in the digital age!

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CUIng…the NEW BASICS for writing in the digital age!

Whether a piece of writing, from a tweet or text to an email or full-blown report, is itsy-bitsy or multitudinous, delivered electronically or in print, it must fork over useful information or it won’t be read.

(This, btw, is why we dislike most writing done in school—we call it “writing for teachers”—because it usually takes the USEFUL out of USEFUL INFORMATION. It’s written for a teacher or a phantom reader, not a real USER/READER.)

Therefore, we wish to change the conversation about “writing.” We’d like to start calling it CUIng—Clustering Useful Information.

Find out why writers should love their readers the way galaxies love their black holes….

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